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Colloid (Free verse) by skaskowski
As it rains outside
The drops are like tiny fragments of water
Falling
like objects that are dropped...
Inside the house,
The fireplace
crackles
With a sound like burning flakes of wood.
Inside my chest,
My
heart beats
Like a routinely contracting muscle.
Outside my chest
The
light bulb glares
Like a radiant object of luminousity.
Outside the
house
The thunder echoes
Like a great booming of atmospheric origin.
Above the cloud
The moon still shines
Like an object reflecting sunlight.
Inside my brain
I feel a thought
Like a synapse firing an electric
charge
And i hear the sound
of a car
Rolling away like an object on
wheels...
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.965517
Weighted score: 4.9656024
Overall Rank: 8516
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST
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