Macaroni and Cheese

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 3 comments

Your breath your skin I'll dive right in to the Azure speckled menagerie Of time and the love that stretches wings Come here my friend-you're safe with me I'll love you-oh-incessantly with you're Crippled smile and fading heart let's Make this strong-let's never part When touching deep-dive deep your soul Abyss of bliss when its time for more Away with anxious worrying eyes Sleep deep my dear, fears a disguise Of black-this white-cannot demise But rather create within its bowl This rare jeweled love-unparalleled Sleep deep my friend-tomorrows here I'll be inside, a dripping tear stained-joy waiting for your sigh-oh let's away The journeys wheels are pulling up We'll begin again-yes fill my cup With the wine of your lips-your drunken smile Experience ecstasy within the mile.

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[0] anonymous 6-Jul-01/3:45 PM Reply

"incessantly with you're" -- "your"; "its time for more" -- "it's"; "fears a disguise" -- "fear's"; "tomorrows here" -- "tomorrow's"; ... interesting, all in all; I could do with more punctuation showing how the poem was supposed to flow. I don't get "azure" with macaroni and cheese....?

[0] anonymous 7-Jul-01/1:21 AM Reply

keep the title, throw away everything else.

[0] anonymous 10-May-02/5:42 PM Reply

Good title, bad poem.