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Up close, far away (Free verse) by Oddsboy
What are you looking at?
I see you stare
Off into space,
Like your eyes had rolled
To some distant land.
What could you be thinking,
When your defenses lower
For just that second,
And all eternity drifts
About you.
Is it hate, is it war
Is it eggs and hamsters
That you think of?
You could be thinking
of all manner of stuff
from marbles to crickets
and bricks to friends.
Or is it love,
And, perhaps, gasp, me?
Or is it just bad poetry?
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.857143
Weighted score: 4.96158
Overall Rank: 8518
Posted: July 11, 2002 12:52 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 12:52 PM PDT
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