poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Macaroni and Cheese by RosiePosie.

anonymous6 Jul 2001

"incessantly with you're" -- "your"; "its time for more" -- "it's"; "fears a disguise" -- "fear's"; "tomorrows here" -- "tomorrow's"; ... interesting, all in all; I could do with more punctuation showing how the poem was supposed to flow. I don't get "azure" with macaroni and cheese....?