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Forever Tired (Free verse) by Antares42
I'm tired, so very tired Of living this life This lie Is this all I'm tired, so very tired Of feeling this way So empty Will it end I'm tired, so very tired Of being alone Always unseen Is it real I'm tired, so very tired Of having no escape No relief Or is there I'm tired, so very tired Of living this life This lie I must sleep

Up the ladder: Her Secret
Down the ladder: pain: siamese verse 2

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.142857
Weighted score: 4.769479
Overall Rank: 11383
Posted: July 28, 2002 11:34 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2002 11:34 PM PDT
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[4] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-Jul-02/12:33 AM | Reply
you must. so do. pooc
[0] god'swife @ 67.73.32.241 | 13-Oct-03/6:58 PM | Reply
Boring
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