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Her Secret (Other) by wunboi
She will not let me climb her stair Nor place my foot upon her landing To turn the key to understanding

Up the ladder: Deceitful World
Down the ladder: Forever Tired

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.142857
Weighted score: 4.769479
Overall Rank: 11382
Posted: July 17, 2002 5:23 AM PDT; Last modified: July 17, 2002 5:23 AM PDT
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[0] horus8 @ 63.146.150.34 | 19-Jul-02/3:36 PM | Reply
HEY, I GOT A KEY YOU CAN TURN. TURN MY LAP SNORKLE THE REASON SHE WON'T LET YOU CLIMB HER STAIRS IS CUZ SHE'S WORRIED ABOUT YOU FALLING OFF WITH YOUR LAME LEG, HOOK HAND, AND HUNCHBACK.
[7] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 20-Sep-02/6:06 AM | Reply
Short and cute like Drew Barrymore.
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