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Deceitful World (Lyric) by elixir
What is wrong with everyone? They're all just not the same From the truth they seem to run And play their two-faced game Their smile is fake and out of fun Their acts are dull and lame They do this as if it should be done As if it's their first aim I looked for a reason, but I found none Not even facts that I could frame To my life they arrived one by one On their fanciful friendship plane I cannot stand this, I can't move on I really wish they'd never came

Up the ladder: Escape
Down the ladder: Her Secret

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.142857
Weighted score: 4.769479
Overall Rank: 11376
Posted: July 14, 2002 10:47 AM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2002 10:47 AM PDT
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