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Escape (Free verse) by Redfin
Drifting waves where the unicorn plays, The searching out of time. Where elves dance in a moonlight trance Wandering through my mind. Peace brings all these things, As I slowly sink into my dreams, Letting reailty die away Until another day.

Down the ladder: Deceitful World

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.142857
Weighted score: 4.769479
Overall Rank: 11380
Posted: July 13, 2002 9:46 PM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2002 9:46 PM PDT
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[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 20-Aug-02/7:56 AM | Reply
sweet dreams, saccharin boy. my dreams tend to be a little more, shall we say, carnal...and that always paints a smile on my slumbering visage
[6] Amelia @ 216.79.66.34 | 20-Aug-02/3:43 PM | Reply
This is nice, and speaks of contentment, I like it.
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