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The spinning infirmary (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Who. On this planet. Is not. A crutchling.
Up the ladder: Go On a Business Trip
Down the ladder: Russian Roulette
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Overall Rank: 810
Posted: October 14, 2003 8:52 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2003 8:52 AM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 14-Oct-03/10:04 AM | Reply
Who indeed? A startling, troubling, moving look at homelessness in the twenty-first century.
[n/a] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 14-Oct-03/10:32 AM | Reply
Are crutchlings always homeless?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.47 > wFraser Allonby Q.C.w | 14-Oct-03/10:40 AM | Reply
Have you heard horus8's solo acoustic version of The Crutchling?

http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/The%20Crutchling.mp3
[n/a] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 14-Oct-03/10:49 AM | Reply
'Twas in response to the aforesaid recording that I posted a suggestion (since deleted) that all the money collected via the "Alms" section should be spent on singing lessons for Mr Handrinos. Alas, my wise policy was not implemented.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > wFraser Allonby Q.C.w | 14-Oct-03/9:15 PM | Reply
I fear singing lessons would only make me sound as if I spend a lot of time worrying about the way I sound? And of course now I'll be losing sleep over your interpretation of my interpretation, although, I notice you don't have one. Which goes to say, I at least, do.
[8] god'swife @ 67.73.29.151 | 14-Oct-03/10:24 AM | Reply
Great title. You forgot the question mark. I thoroughly agree with your assesment. I'm constantly being transferred between the pysch. ward and cardiology. Why so brief, these poems of yours?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > god'swife | 14-Oct-03/2:47 PM | Reply
since i cannot seem to find truth or honesty anywhere, can you tell me if I am in the right place?
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 > INTRANSIT | 14-Oct-03/7:20 PM | Reply
Yes.
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 > Shuushin | 14-Oct-03/7:20 PM | Reply
(he's lying)
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 > Shuushin | 14-Oct-03/7:20 PM | Reply
no. I'm not.
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 14-Oct-03/7:22 PM | Reply
awesome title. Toss a questionmark into the text and call it done.

I like.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Oct-03/9:01 PM | Reply
Lord Chutney for one.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Oct-03/9:18 PM | Reply
micah isaiah handrinos (my son spelled his name)
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