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20 most recent comments by Bachus (1041-1060) and replies

Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones 30-Oct-02/9:43 AM
i liked the title and mood...i've never been much of a morning person...which is my point.6.
Re: a comment on i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus 29-Oct-02/10:30 PM
glad you could make it.. i see you brought your grandmother again...excellent! i'll get the pudding.(i taped all seven days of the bold and the beatifull last week, and i have three dee glArseS..sit down and try the slippers..they're made from hippo.n
Re: a comment on Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus 29-Oct-02/10:20 PM
someone told me you were writing for gore in tennesse, i didn't expect you around...pardon me while i feed the coi carp...would you like something to drink...perhaps...cigarettes and chocolate milk?
Re: Corpse's Crescendo by phbiscuit 29-Oct-02/9:37 PM
yeah...that is a tough thing to remember how to do? and metaphor-ic-ally too?
Re: Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on 29-Oct-02/9:29 PM
alright...i don't know why, well yeah i do, but this piece broke my fucking broken heart from atoms to quarks. you deserve a 10 if not for just proving to me that this style of writing can still be poignant and effective..then for making me even consider why. 10..if i was horus8 i'd give you a golden que-tip award, but i'm not. i'm ryan thorstad.10!e
Re: A love of the midlands by ==Doylum 29-Oct-02/6:26 PM
i went cow tipping once in bellingham. i am the shoe horn that invented sophistication, and the blow dryer.
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird 29-Oct-02/12:52 PM
ouch. atari.
Re: Beer by Yardbird 29-Oct-02/12:51 PM
i agree with the chick who likes horse piss. everytime, actually.
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~> 29-Oct-02/12:49 PM
perhaps. an eight dollar barley wine filled glass, and a salt throw over my left shoulder for richard harris..i cry on your shoulder and repent for me and all of mine..in that valley everything hooks and my barbs get filed straight...how about another date?
sorry that i tend to over compensate, and right turn clyde the guard rail. want some kale? i have a new gun.
Re: survival of the weakest by brazen 28-Oct-02/10:31 AM
What? i suppose the reverse couldn't be argued either? you sir have od in willy wonka's chocolate factory and the oompa loompas gang raped you on the marshmallow bank of the butterscotch river...here's to the trials of life! 10!-9+5= my middle finger! 6.
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus 28-Oct-02/10:24 AM
and eviltwin you should know..i heard last weak in the steam romm you gave a three day oration on the topic of "cads and why they diddle with theres and everyone elses poopers and how to properly insert the ancient staff of Yor!" yes sir evil you have your finger on the pulse of just what is and just what isn't 'stupid' these days, and that's why you have my trust and scrotismil dedication for a treat later if you'd like. really
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus 26-Oct-02/12:36 PM
i'm actually a hundred a ninety three. cheers
Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones 26-Oct-02/10:04 AM
see what happens when you spray pina colada car scents to fast while on the freeway.overdosed on fruitiness.6.
Re: New Hope by brazen 26-Oct-02/10:02 AM
what is this arbor day? THAT'S IT! THAT'S IT! there's your title, and or statement? what the fuck is this tree hugging shit? some sort of metaphorical coming of age poem to the family and nature...well you lost me in the first stanza..and i'm not coming out for anything less than a handfull of pistaccios. capeesh. bastard. fuck! you've gone a tangled my noodle. bastard.
Re: Society's Sharades by New Life Drug 26-Oct-02/9:56 AM
it's fucking amazing..somehow you manage to mispell shit and pull it off..cheers.lol!7.
Re: The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle 26-Oct-02/9:49 AM
heathers have been known to do this..they also appear in quite a few of my 'pieces' of shite also. bitches. whores.junkies the lot of them. in fact in spoken word tromp..youthfullfountain..the evil wench in that is a heather..fucking whores!there there brother..together we will clad them in leather and ride there slimy gashes straight INTO HELL!!!!!HAHAHA. 9.
Re: I can't write by Mutant_X 26-Oct-02/9:44 AM
your right you can't...perhaps you can bullit kiss? or maybe wrist the razor? have fun.0.
Re: Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w 26-Oct-02/9:42 AM
apparently not very much.
Re: a comment on The primates fate (chrystal ball foot switch) by Bachus 25-Oct-02/1:32 PM
you ae perniciously ferromagnetic, and quite mad..cheers! see you sunday.
Re: Stranger by feathers68 23-Oct-02/5:06 PM
lol. i think? or you could be the devil? forget about it.


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