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Corpse's Crescendo (Free verse) by phbiscuit
The sun leapt off the rooftops
And I chanced to see you
Lying there,
Waiting for something.
I thought it strange
That the color of your skin
Should match that of the
Hard-boiled egg I
Asked you to eat.
You wanted to know
If friends were coming
To say goodbye
Before we left
For the coast?
I do not think so.
Please, eat your breakfast,
It will get cold.
I'll leave you alone,
I suppose that is what you wanted,
I'll let you figure out how to breathe.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1290
Posted: October 29, 2002 7:42 PM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2002 7:42 PM PST
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