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Come Night time (Free verse) by anitawit
(10.10.95)
Come night time-
Fragrant stars bloom on dark velvet branches
And drip silently
To a pile
As the evening tree dips
Its fingers onto the earth
Come night time-
Suspended in the heart of unfathomable blue
Diamonds in the sky
Throb serenely with self-contained light
Come night time-
And windows of light
Glow in the dark valleys below
Little pinpoints of light are everywhere;
Valiant spurts of life, secure eternally
In the matrix of death.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1291
Posted: November 22, 2002 8:47 AM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2002 8:47 AM PST
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