Re: me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar	28-Dec-02/2:02 PM
pain is a living mongoose scrotum adorning fashion attachment. ALL ELSE is shower curtain hoops.p
Re: a comment on im playing basketball by rockinindividual	27-Dec-02/6:57 PM
why use 500 words than when you can compress life even more. poetry is about compressing. prose is about explaining in detail here example in haiku Parents fight, alot. On the court i vent, escape. With sweat comes wisdom. either or, it's all good. i still think underneath it all there is always more brewing and if there's not, there should be. writing is like acting and performing music it's about heightening the stories and experience, not flattening them..otherwise we would be flooded with one dimensional blee blee until we all folded into complaisancy. i think that there is a specific reason behind everything and to ignore that is to doom oneself into routines of fog enshrouded submissiveness. defined motivation is the key to brilliant writing. understanding terms to understand oneself. label actions, and pull from that file in confidence. don't settle for less, beg for more. i play basketball when i'm lonely, i'm frustrated, i need to feel in control, i need to touch something i'm familiar with, to escape, to feel good about myself again, to lose weight, for fun, to watch cindy zuniga practice with the cheerleading squad..there is always a reason..always!..to say there isn't..is to be unaware, and immature. i enjoyed the piece, but i write, he plays basketball, and i know for a fact. it could be better, and it will, to eat simply because your hungry is to miss out on just how good some food can truly be.
Re: Return to Kadath by razorgrin	27-Dec-02/4:02 PM
the eye of sarnath sees all.
Re: A Short Letter by Ranger	27-Dec-02/3:33 PM
indeed.
Re: Your sacrifice by Crakyamuni	26-Dec-02/2:38 PM
Could you edit it thinner and more verticle? to increase the structures longevity and quicken the read to memory.
Re: The Canvassers by Nicholas Jones	26-Dec-02/1:35 PM
i think this is definetly a winner Nick. the last stanza could of had a bit more hope? awareness is more than half of the bottle.
Re: futile existence by chinstrap	26-Dec-02/1:30 PM
tsk. tsk. i was hoping for something involving your chinstrip, and more futility. bummer. great user name though.
Re: Truth at last by w~* ATHENA *~w	26-Dec-02/1:27 PM
inxs has never sounded worse, and you left out..."i've got a new sensation" which is a dissappointment indeed.
Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	25-Dec-02/3:01 PM
merry x-mas mr. bogs hehehe http://poetry.rotten.com/eye-gouge/
Re: My Friend? by Blade	25-Dec-02/2:58 PM
merry christmas nig-or. Anthrax Baby rotten.com ------------------------------------------------------------------------ The government released this photo of the seven month old baby that was diagnosed with cutaneous anthrax, but since it hasn't appeared anywhere else on the web, here's a video snapshot hot off CNN, if you missed it when it was broadcast. [We will update with a better photo when we find one.].
Re: The toilet by The Eskimo King	25-Dec-02/2:49 PM
Merry christmas fuck nose. Now browsing people with keyword poetry. [exit]My keywords: cafes cheesecake chocolate christian church coffee conversation creative dancing dreaming emo music food god holy spirit hoodies jesus laughter love our lady peace poetry randomness russian stars straight edge techno understanding winternot. breathing is no foreign task, because my inhale is your only exhale. i grasp the shards of the pedestals you've broken, but i'm the one crashing down.. You can share this with a friend: http://www.hotornot.com/r/?emid=EMRREY
Re: Hot town, summer in the city! by bondjedi	25-Dec-02/1:28 PM
Mullanonymous At first glance, the words "engineer" or "math teacher" may come to mind. However, don't be too hasty when assesing the "Mullanonymous"... this chameleon has the power to blend in and adapt to many social groups. Even though I can not truly pinpoint or narrow this "master of disguise" down to one category, manifestos and biological/chemical warfare come to mind. yes i dig, that's what i do.
Re: One of those days by susie	24-Dec-02/2:27 PM
honey, you are special pretty, and you have a very soecial purpose in life. probably vet school, but just not poetry. Bad poetry does not equal bad looking just the opposite actually, and i can almost already imagine just how beautifull you are.
Re: a comment on "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus	24-Dec-02/2:20 PM
you could say derrrhhaaassssttreesddghgfdrre!, and then throw yourself in traffic.
Re: Paying for Sin by kaykat	24-Dec-02/2:18 PM
"you really must word your comments more crearly.." ha ha ha. yes .yes. the cads will now perform their latest hit "I Crearly love you, also known as "i queerly love you too" in e minor. for the asians of course. [by the way this poem rocks, NOT super queef!
Re: a comment on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8	24-Dec-02/2:07 PM
what exactly is he insecure about again? Where his girl works? or his 'problems' all of them fantasies you've been programmed into believing. horus8, is no more or less insecure than any other user at poemranker. including and most of all you, our faithfull leader. Such poison tipped rebuttles? i feel almost moved to cry at this moment in time by your harsh tone sir! Don't mistake a return for a serve and call it 40 love home skillet, it's unbecoming and it makes your lip tremble and eye twitch. revolting really, you picking on that nice truck driver like that. tsk.tsk. you are an elitist shit-stain somewhere between the left shoulder of 'id' and the right nostril of 'ego'. but with the heart of a cock-a-roach. disgusting really, your attitude leaves little to be remembered.
Re: a comment on Thorns by poetandknowit	23-Dec-02/5:16 PM
"unfathomably heavy sarcasm" this is my favorite part, you mean your anal retentive fixation with the human digestive system and hiv (e.g your fucking library) you are in hard core denial bros. just get buggered and shit on already for christ sake and get it over with. what are you afraid of? aids?l
Re: a comment on Thorns by poetandknowit	23-Dec-02/5:06 PM
umm i mean YOU'RE next ASL. and don't forget my fucking retarded key board kicks up letters at the end of sentences. also i write nothing like you, and everything i've stolen from you was used creatively and turned into something not 'yours' anymore but 'mine'. shame really and "i come from a long line of poets, so i hope you enjoy my poems". cuz i'm texas..ha ha jerkcity jesus christ, from brilliant theories to compulsive reclarifications 'for' the public..you are really a piece of work. don't slip on a sheet of ice and break your splendid face. merrychristmas.r
Re: a comment on Thorns by poetandknowit	23-Dec-02/4:59 PM
your next.f
Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit	23-Dec-02/4:49 PM
unless of course, he is stan rice. now that would be the ultimate in theatre. ha ha,(p&k = stan rice) than i'd be wrong, but i'm not am i.E