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Paying for Sin

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Dec 2002 · 10 comments

Here in hell we are to stay This is where our debts we'll pay I see the face of the devil I see him now on a different level Paying now for my sin I knew that I wouldn't win I'm cast into the hellish fire My ashes fly higher and higer For eternity my body will burn I see now that I'll never learn

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[n/a] SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/2:03 PM Reply

at least your ashes are going to heaven

[n/a] kaykat › SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/2:04 PM Reply

yeah cool huh!!!

[n/a] SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/2:14 PM Reply

What is your question...? you asked "do you not like asians" as if you do not, like, know what I mean, or you like to not know what you've seen or like you think Asia is a bad place for futuristic bad people or I am, like, bad for using the word Asia...or you want your money back for the Asia CD you bought thinking it waz something better than an underated 80's band...you really must word your comments more crearly...

[n/a] kaykat › SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/2:19 PM Reply

Sorry, just wondering what they did to you.

[4] Bachus 24-Dec-02/2:18 PM Reply

"you really must word your comments more crearly.." ha ha ha. yes .yes. the cads will now perform their latest hit "I Crearly love you, also known as "i queerly love you too" in e minor. for the asians of course. [by the way this poem rocks, NOT super queef!

[n/a] kaykat › Bachus 24-Dec-02/2:22 PM Reply

Wow I really don't know what to say to you Bachus, first you stand up for me then you put me down. I'm so hurt! HA!

[n/a] SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/2:27 PM Reply

What have they done to you that makes you project that feeling coming from me. I said Id meet you there. Do you not like asia? Do you not want to go? It's a nice place. Or just as nice as our US. Pearl Harbor happened 60 years ago, get over it.Oh, I forgot, you like the japanese, but not the asians. Stop being so critical of those asians whom you've never met...It's rreally un PC

[n/a] kaykat › SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/2:35 PM Reply

Ha, your a funny kid! Ya know what's weird I accualy like your critical humor.

[8] INTRANSIT › kaykat 24-Dec-02/2:53 PM Reply

Good for you KK. I don't do well with critical humor. You're off to a better start than I am.

[n/a] kaykat › INTRANSIT 25-Dec-02/11:51 AM Reply

thanx a bunch!