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Paying for Sin (Free verse) by kaykat Here in hell
we are to stay
This is where
our debts we'll pay
I see the face
of the devil
I see him now
on a different level
Paying now
for my sin
I knew that I
wouldn't win
I'm cast into
the hellish fire
My ashes fly
higher and higer
For eternity
my body will burn
I see now that
I'll never learn
Up the ladder:
The Dance
Down the ladder:
???????
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Posted: December 24, 2002 1:50 PM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 1:50 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.820706 Overall Rank: 10915 Comments:
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SP REYNOLDS @ 209.178.159.73
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24-Dec-02/2:03 PM
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at least your ashes are going to heaven
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kaykat @ 209.83.111.78
> SP REYNOLDS
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24-Dec-02/2:04 PM
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yeah cool huh!!!
What is your question...? you asked "do you not like asians" as if you do not, like, know what I mean, or you like to not know what you've seen or like you think Asia is a bad place for futuristic bad people or I am, like, bad for using the word Asia...or you want your money back for the Asia CD you bought thinking it waz something better than an underated 80's band...you really must word your comments more crearly...
Sorry, just wondering what they did to you.
"you really must word your comments more crearly.." ha ha ha. yes .yes. the cads will now perform their latest hit "I Crearly love you, also known as "i queerly love you too" in e minor. for the asians of course. [by the way this poem rocks, NOT super queef!
Wow I really don't know what to say to you Bachus, first you stand up for me then you put me down. I'm so hurt! HA!
What have they done to you that makes you project that feeling coming from me. I said Id meet you there. Do you not like asia? Do you not want to go? It's a nice place. Or just as nice as our US. Pearl Harbor happened 60 years ago, get over it.Oh, I forgot, you like the japanese, but not the asians. Stop being so critical of those asians whom you've never met...It's rreally un PC
Ha, your a funny kid! Ya know what's weird I accualy like your critical humor.
Good for you KK. I don't do well with critical humor. You're off to a better start than I am.
thanx a bunch!
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