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One of those days (Free verse) by susie
Today is one of those days, that I'm not happy with myself. Don't like me, don't want me, and want to be someone else. Why would I go to school, if no one listens to me, and forget that I'm there too. I'd love to be someone else for one day. Someone pretty, someone popular, someone people notice when they walk by. Today I think I'm ugly and think I have no purpose in life, though somewhere in the back of my mind I know I'm not ugly, and know I do have a purpose. I Hope tomorrow is one of those days, that I'm happy with myself. That I can except the way I am, and that I know that everyone is beautiful in there own unique way. So I am welcomming tomorrow with open arms. Hoping it'll be a better day, a better day for the world, and a better day for me.

Up the ladder: A hug :)
Down the ladder: Charm

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.285714
Weighted score: 5.0768404
Overall Rank: 6505
Posted: December 24, 2002 12:22 PM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 12:22 PM PST
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[7] kaykat @ 209.83.111.78 | 24-Dec-02/1:53 PM | Reply
I like it, sometimes I feel like that too.
[5] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Dec-02/2:27 PM | Reply
honey, you are special pretty, and you have a very soecial purpose in life. probably vet school, but just not poetry. Bad poetry does not equal bad looking just the opposite actually, and i can almost already imagine just how beautifull you are.
[9] deleted user @ 195.173.242.188 | 25-Dec-02/6:47 AM | Reply
I think everybody feels like that sometimes.
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