Re: Mississipi Murder by scitz	3-Mar-03/4:09 PM
Negros have rights too, and this is proof.
Re: The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos	3-Mar-03/4:08 PM
i heard about that amazing.
Re: Dance With Me by marvelis	3-Mar-03/4:06 PM
the twinkle in your bling the blang in your twang, chirpe durp boo wurp twittyboo. chandoliers falling onto my wait staff alas alas the diamonds have chiseled off their faces. i think poemranker needs some fresh poets, da. was right all has been read... but nothing haas yet been said "From my chair I now do part And come to you with all my heart." brilliant
Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin	3-Mar-03/4:02 PM
you need double penetration undoubtedly.
Re: I Can't Wait Till Christmas Day Resubmission by Teen14	3-Mar-03/3:51 PM
yeah... i can't wait till the 4th of july to shoot your eye out with a bottle rockeeet.
Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike	3-Mar-03/3:46 PM
Lonedisco29andahalf i'll have you know is a full grown man.
Re: a comment on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik	2-Mar-03/6:27 PM
Hidden meaning? Vague? it's about getting use to life and change for the unsurprising surpise of dying inevitably. in other words, beauty holds death as well as death holds beauty, Nature reveals this point on every level. mix that with the fact that i'm a sun baby with a shark and wave fetish and vualla shark fin and femur soup. the water coupled by the babtism by blood and nature. Jesus walked on water. We don't.
Re: a comment on For those who play with shit by <{Baba^Yaga}>	2-Mar-03/6:18 PM
Don't. Because in all honesty i could fucking give a shit really. As for the topic being 'not great' was it suppose to be? Style? that's funny. you're funny? do you detect a pattern? Good for you, congradulation glad it wasn't to cryptic for you. tell me smart guy? How is this haiku series any different from your user name? Exactly, my point. same purpose don't be hypocrite it makes you look stupid.
Re: a comment on alienheart by Bill Z Bub	1-Mar-03/2:47 AM
Growl is actually one of those earlier songs off of my first album that i rather enjoy. Every time i wanted the back up singer to giggle laugh i would just push her belly. Now that's an instrument. My favorite song though is thorn apple the baby fat. It's well produced, has great chords and lyrics. What i call the hole in one.
Re: The Feild In Which I Live by Fear of Garbage	27-Feb-03/4:53 PM
Perhaps you swing pipe. though small and just an elbow joint with a little sodder and brazing... who knows, free plumbing. Your spelling of field is really worth the read though, i would imagine, right?
Re: His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger	27-Feb-03/4:25 PM
"four calm winds" this part does not fit in the hospital. Try changing it to "clean white sheets".
Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~>	27-Feb-03/4:15 PM
I recieved the magazine today. It looks delightful. Thank you so much for everything. You are a true friend Z. and a great writer. I will give you my feedback perhaps later on the phone. Cute pictures. Very interesting blood line. Cheers.
Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~>	27-Feb-03/3:58 PM
Horns a velvet.
Re: 9/11/01 by Jarah	27-Feb-03/2:55 PM
Wow, you would know. 9/11/01? what will we do if the next attack comes on a date not so symbolically pleasing like say 7/11/03 Will you call that "fucking big gulp and two lotto ticket day with a pack of menthols please, Hadid?" Do us a favor, move to Iraq and hold the bullseye.
Re: a comment on Gargamel & Azriel by Bachus	26-Feb-03/2:05 PM
One should not pronounce nor say that angel's name correctly because it is an evil name, sir.
Re: Fugly by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:52 PM
You know what's funny? Apparently i said the same thing over a month ago. Why would you not fix that? It makes you look terribly retarded.
Re: Fugly by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:50 PM
"I advise you take head in what I say, prepare". Okay, i'll take head? And an arm too? The word you were looking for is 'heed' As in heed your face it's not yours vulvanator. Regardless of the fact that your 'subject and theme' is a bigwheel in the shadow of a harley (in theme terms). i felt your pain. here's a six.
Re: No future by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:44 PM
This is a bit more arc'd and much better then the other two, actually. that 's why i gave it a six.
Re: No future by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:42 PM
This one is called "Senior tongue lender". Or, " Fuck you Turkey, read the poeme" Or, "A poem you can pop".
Re: Escape is an Unaffordable luxury by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:36 PM
By the way in that last poem you began a sentence with "There fore" it's Therefore,. This one you should call "Great White fuckin' sucks""