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Fugly

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Jan 2003 · Edited 25 Jul 2003 · 11 comments

Sittin on a lonely corner, No way to let the time pass with out feeling the pain no way to escape my problems even if I only desire to get away Running away made me feel safe Running away never solved my sorrow Fleeing from the truth never let me live My life is hidden I know these walls they scream of hell and worse I created it all myself No one not even I can destroy them They spring up with out the moments notice worst of all it harms everyone I am defeated I have become week Essentially disgusting I laugh at others in pain I can't help my nature to be a bitch... I see the path of devastation. How could I possibly commit an atrocity like this Why did I have to add you to the list of casualties I have harmed even the innocent by stander These lives lived in pain cause the strong to wither If only you saw me before the end of purity You'd see an infant child pure And low here I am to torment the undeserving How could I grow to be this If you had been there would I have been saved God I can't figure it out any more This fell apart before I knew what I was doing I became the hunter I became the immoral Nothing you do can escape my wrath's extent Into the realms unknown we travel I advise you take head in what I say, prepare For I should be slain When I fall rejoice I must give up these Evils before they command me Shead no tear for it is hatered that turns the knife

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11 comments

[9] Carvaceous 13-Jan-03/7:55 PM Reply

One of ur better ones!

[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> 13-Jan-03/8:23 PM Reply

"I advise you take head in what I say, prepare" yeah, take head in all i say.lol.

[n/a] Freethinker1602 › <{Baba^Yaga}> 13-Jan-03/8:32 PM Reply

cluck boo, typing error. It is the nature of human to foul. and you knew what I meant. Many ppl forgot what it means to want to know what your poetry actually is. I mean look. Y'all gotta look once again at your purile self befor eyou turned bitter. Remember what you want and then go for it....I am looking for my dream to know what I do can be good. Search for yors and one shall help you along the way

[10] Ranger 14-Jan-03/1:55 AM Reply

Wonderful proverb here (Chinese, I think)-"Never laugh at a man's dreams, for a person without dreams is nothing" (I think that's how it goes).

[9] ChunkyHunkyMonkey 28-Jan-03/5:56 PM Reply

I like........but im more of a romantic type of poem person

[6] Bachus 26-Feb-03/1:50 PM Reply

"I advise you take head in what I say, prepare". Okay, i'll take head? And an arm too? The word you were looking for is 'heed' As in heed your face it's not yours vulvanator.

Regardless of the fact that your 'subject and theme' is a bigwheel in the shadow of a harley (in theme terms). i felt your pain. here's a six.

[6] Bachus 26-Feb-03/1:52 PM Reply

You know what's funny? Apparently i said the same thing over a month ago.
Why would you not fix that? It makes you look terribly retarded.

[n/a] Freethinker1602 › Bachus 26-Feb-03/3:33 PM Reply

I haven't the slitest clue what you said. I changed most of the titles to my poems because my mom found them and read them. She did a little sneaking around, this site is a privelege only to those that find the site through legit means...She however did not. Crystie if you read this...Fuck you. YOU had no right, I don't even live with mom any more, not that I ever will. So just fuck off next time you feel like further tarnishing the relationship with mom.

[n/a] Freethinker1602 › Freethinker1602 26-Feb-03/3:33 PM Reply

Hehehe sorry, any ways bachus, I don't read your work

[n/a] Tintagiles 20-May-04/7:05 PM Reply

'Sblood. 'Tis terrible.

[3] Jeremi B. Handrinos 20-May-04/8:10 PM Reply

Plucky