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Fugly (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
Sittin on a lonely corner,
No way to let the time pass
with out feeling the pain
no way to escape my problems
even if I only desire to get away
Running away made me feel safe
Running away never solved my sorrow
Fleeing from the truth never let me live
My life is hidden I know these walls
they scream of hell and worse
I created it all myself
No one not even I can destroy them
They spring up with out the moments notice
worst of all it harms everyone
I am defeated I have become week
Essentially disgusting
I laugh at others in pain
I can't help my nature to be a bitch...
I see the path of devastation.
How could I possibly commit an atrocity like this
Why did I have to add you to the list of casualties
I have harmed even the innocent by stander
These lives lived in pain cause the strong to wither
If only you saw me before the end of purity
You'd see an infant child pure
And low here I am to torment the undeserving
How could I grow to be this
If you had been there would I have been saved
God I can't figure it out any more
This fell apart before I knew what I was doing
I became the hunter I became the immoral
Nothing you do can escape my wrath's extent
Into the realms unknown we travel
I advise you take head in what I say, prepare
For I should be slain
When I fall rejoice I must give up these
Evils before they command me
Shead no tear for it is hatered that turns the knife
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11594
Posted: January 13, 2003 7:52 PM PST; Last modified: July 25, 2003 11:55 PM PDT
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