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Song of Exodus (Free verse) by marvelis
My friends I ponder. What is the life's wonder? Could this be all that is life? Could all life offers be just a hyphe? Most will never know. They say I too will never know. But to this I say, "No!" "To live just a second is far better Than to live behind a blanker." So you have to understand That I must stand! This is my final chance. My final dance. Do or die The reward is high Failure leads to an end of misery. Or maybe, perhaps a new agony. Whatever it may be, I have to try. For the reward is just too high. And this is my final chance; My final dance.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11588
Posted: January 7, 2003 5:57 PM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2003 5:57 PM PST
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[2] <~> @ 67.84.171.238 | 7-Jan-03/11:09 PM | Reply
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[9] Another Bobjim?!?! @ 212.219.142.161 | 8-Jan-03/2:57 AM | Reply
Also good. 9
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