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Song of Exodus

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

My friends I ponder. What is the life's wonder? Could this be all that is life? Could all life offers be just a hyphe? Most will never know. They say I too will never know. But to this I say, "No!" "To live just a second is far better Than to live behind a blanker." So you have to understand That I must stand! This is my final chance. My final dance. Do or die The reward is high Failure leads to an end of misery. Or maybe, perhaps a new agony. Whatever it may be, I have to try. For the reward is just too high. And this is my final chance; My final dance.

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[2] <~> 7-Jan-03/11:09 PM Reply
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[9] Another Bobjim?!?! 8-Jan-03/2:57 AM Reply
Also good. 9