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Fugly (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

Sittin on a lonely corner, No way to let the time pass with out feeling the pain no way to escape my problems even if I only desire to get away Running away made me feel safe Running away never solved my sorrow Fleeing from the truth never let me live My life is hidden I know these walls they scream of hell and worse I created it all myself No one not even I can destroy them They spring up with out the moments notice worst of all it harms everyone I am defeated I have become week Essentially disgusting I laugh at others in pain I can't help my nature to be a bitch... I see the path of devastation. How could I possibly commit an atrocity like this Why did I have to add you to the list of casualties I have harmed even the innocent by stander These lives lived in pain cause the strong to wither If only you saw me before the end of purity You'd see an infant child pure And low here I am to torment the undeserving How could I grow to be this If you had been there would I have been saved God I can't figure it out any more This fell apart before I knew what I was doing I became the hunter I became the immoral Nothing you do can escape my wrath's extent Into the realms unknown we travel I advise you take head in what I say, prepare For I should be slain When I fall rejoice I must give up these Evils before they command me Shead no tear for it is hatered that turns the knife

Ranger 14-Jan-03/1:55 AM
Wonderful proverb here (Chinese, I think)-"Never laugh at a man's dreams, for a person without dreams is nothing" (I think that's how it goes).




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