Re: a comment on MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	19-Sep-03/5:49 PM
actually.. shes old.. bipolar and mentally challenged aswell.
Re: a comment on MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	19-Sep-03/5:27 PM
you could have done better.. made it smaller.. ex: shit, fuck, or: ASS! etc. but ill give you an 8 anyway.
Re: a comment on MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	19-Sep-03/5:26 PM
well.. im not sure about profound, but its fucking funny. sure beats the other one he made lmao.
Re: a comment on Lucky Joe Finds a Ring by DreamerSupreme	19-Sep-03/4:41 PM
.. -scratches his skull- well, its not that hard to understand.. are you on drugs? i am.
Re: The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik	19-Sep-03/4:36 PM
last line caught me off guard. interesting.. probly the last line that moves me to vote on a haiku lol. 9
Re: a comment on reflexion v.3 - Cannibalization and Twilight by Don-Quixote	19-Sep-03/4:33 PM
Thesaurophilia lol.. what words can i use? eh? pfft. pointedly unanswered questions? might you be kind enough to point that out, or clear up my confusion with this.
Re: a comment on A Question of the Future by razorgrin	9-Sep-03/9:38 PM
heh.. ive said similiar things to him before. -shrug- well, i never liked haikus much, but this one.. its like a bad joke that makes a room go silent for a short moment. no offense, just my opinion. blessed with 5
Re: Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge	1-Sep-03/7:09 PM
Ashes to ashes, Dust to dust. when these first two lines appear, i get annoyed, because its simply starting out with one hell of an overused phrase.. this just, makes me feel like puking on it. 3
Re: a comment on Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge	1-Sep-03/7:06 PM
Cute. Are you going to recite that with pride at the your good Church, your suit freshly pressed and your diaper changed?
Re: a comment on A Cacodemon's Sermon: Message to a Eudemon by Y2kSlamPoet	1-Sep-03/5:51 PM
It was a work of love. Btw, would you be able to offer a suggestion for my a title for "sparrow". Im just irritated with that title and cant figure out a something better.
Re: Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman	1-Sep-03/3:36 AM
Well, now that the space is gone, it flashed light a big surprise into my face!! good! the effect is much better. Good work on the ascii drawing this time.. not as good as one of settles masterpieces, but its no longer "crappy". 8!
Re: goofy poem to prove I'm not morbid (Ode to an Onion) by greym0on	1-Sep-03/3:18 AM
"If Eve had tempted Adam With you - Instead of a paltry Apple... We would still be roaming Paradise" and smelling his bad breath... i think my plum idea is a better one.. ;/ blessed with 7.
Re: a comment on Detective vs Doctor (The Explaination) by Y2kSlamPoet	1-Sep-03/3:08 AM
Impersonation of Dark-Angel: Abdulla, this is clearly you saving your ass. Because a logical explaination has been given to provide the reason why dark angel does not do what a psychologist does, which shows why he cannot be called as such. It is also providing an excuse for dark-angel not to respond, which shows that you might actually be dark-angel in disguise. You cannot risk the possibility of revealing the fact that dark-angel is a bad actor, who couldn't provide actual professional therapy to anyone in need of it what so ever. This fact also shows his lack of intelligence, and how unstudied he is in REAL behavioristic psychology. ------ See, i can do it too! but i think i left out the part that says "its all a way of showing that dark-angel has no need to explain, its a sign of denial" Etc etc. A GOOD BULLSHITTER. perfectly suited to be a politician i think, he can talk, he sure can.. but can he say anything of real substance, that remains to be seen.
Re: a comment on Detective vs Doctor (The Explaination) by Y2kSlamPoet	1-Sep-03/2:55 AM
flimsy? Whats incorrect in my logic exactly? hrmm? I consider Dark-Angel unqualified in medical matters.. Thats all, simply one person, and it has nothing to do with my view of detectives. I find his methodes of pseudo psychoanalysis to be crude.. It reminds me of the cliche therapy responses i see made by bad actors in crappy movie productions. Nothing is ever what it is.. hrmm.. its always just me "hiding my inner emotions". Yes.. i cannot reveal the truth that i have been UTTERLY CRUSHED by his remarks!!! i am emotionally traumatized and suffer a case of extreme denial, unable to cope with the realities. Yes yes yes.. i could pay someone 10 bucks to tell me that.. i could do this wonderful "acting" myself and save myself 10 dollars. P-R-E-D-I-C-T-A-B-L-E isnt it?.. see, your comment saved Darkie the finger work of providing his response.. i even said this response for him in a simplier fashion in the official explaination: "detective im sure you will find some unknown clue to the secret "truth" to my "fabricated" response made to perhaps do damage control or what ever.." END OF STORY. Ofcourse, id like him to offer his take on my logic concerning why he can't be called a doctor, where i excluded my personal feeling towards him. I'm curiouse.
Re: Detective vs Doctor (The Explaination) by Y2kSlamPoet	31-Aug-03/9:30 PM
dont worry, im still not a christian, and am doomed to never be blessed with religion.
Re: Paranoia & the thinnest curtain by Jeremi B. Handrinos	31-Aug-03/7:53 PM
Hrmm, might i suggest a subtitle: Claustrophobic Tweaker -shrug- just a thought anyway, your poem sparked this idea.. 9.
Re: Loki's Tryst by OneFingerAnswer	31-Aug-03/7:47 PM
Hrmm.. i might not care for greek mythology poetry, but i think you just sold me on the Norse poetry.. Dont ask me why i like one and not the other.. because im human, opinionated, and am cursed with a discriminative taste organ, aka tongue. 9.
Re: The Love Poem by William Delacroix	31-Aug-03/7:42 PM
Most of it is things ive heard before.. love is a subject that is cursed due to it being overdone, but you still managed to pull it off, somehow, with the heart thing and so on.. slightly out of order, but oh well, you get an 8.
Re: Troublemaker by Patsy	31-Aug-03/7:39 PM
Hrmm.. it doesnt have that quality i call beautiful, but its well written, and crafted with skill, lets call it a comely house wife that can cook a good stew and keep her husband happy.. 9.
Re: So Long for now by thepinkbunnyofdoom	31-Aug-03/7:34 PM
novel? Ahhh, ambition, indeed.. you are striving to be "all that you can be IN THE ARMY" But you bastard, your going to become a mercenary? BAH... ;/ heh. good luck you pink furry rodent. Oh, heres a 10, call it a goodbye present, or whatever.