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A Question of the Future (Haiku) by razorgrin Breakdancers "robot"
Would a robot breakdancer
do "the human"?
Up the ladder:
I am the Ghost of Wesley Willis: ROB LOWE IS HOT
Down the ladder:
Untitled
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.4285715
Posted: September 8, 2003 5:58 PM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2003 5:58 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.577378 Overall Rank: 12597 Comments:
I didn't mean to bash your best bud, but I couldn,t think of anything else to rhyme with vote.
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For all the 0's she's given me
I don't care for her her shit I have to say
But when giving her 0's I don't go out of my way
But now I'm playing the game she plays.
She looks at the best of the poems here
Then hands me 0's like she has no fear.
It's not the content
or the rhythm that gets her bent
Or maybe it is
How the FUCK would we know
if she doesn't leave a comment.
But that's just like our friend
To leave the worst possible vote
Like the poem could be written
by her sex partner the goat.
If she doesn't leave a comment, then how d'you know it was her giving you the zero? Ta ta.
P.S.: hmm... started off well, but the last four lines made it lose its charm. You should have spent a little more time there. Only 7/10, sorry.
A 0 does not indicate the worst poem ever built. It represents a remarquably bad poem. And though I don't always concur with my dear friend razorgrin's opinions -- she has made some truly dreadful judgements in the past, both in likes and dislikes -- I'm afraid I must concur that in this case she was right. That WAS a terrible poem you wrote. The fact that a lot of idiotic young goths with bad tastes gave your poem tens does not mean it's a good poem. It means that a lot of young goths have no taste. That's all.
well, i never liked haikus much, but this one.. its like a bad joke that makes a room go silent for a short moment.
no offense, just my opinion. blessed with 5