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A Question of the Future (Haiku) by razorgrin

Breakdancers "robot" Would a robot breakdancer do "the human"?

Tintagiles 8-Sep-03/7:37 PM
Dear sir/madam/whatever you have the misfortune of being:

If she doesn't leave a comment, then how d'you know it was her giving you the zero? Ta ta.

P.S.: hmm... started off well, but the last four lines made it lose its charm. You should have spent a little more time there. Only 7/10, sorry.




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