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A Question of the Future (Haiku) by razorgrin

Breakdancers "robot" Would a robot breakdancer do "the human"?

sliver 8-Sep-03/7:32 PM
Here,s a 0 for the bitch in a tree
For all the 0's she's given me
I don't care for her her shit I have to say
But when giving her 0's I don't go out of my way
But now I'm playing the game she plays.
She looks at the best of the poems here
Then hands me 0's like she has no fear.
It's not the content
or the rhythm that gets her bent
Or maybe it is
How the FUCK would we know
if she doesn't leave a comment.
But that's just like our friend
To leave the worst possible vote
Like the poem could be written
by her sex partner the goat.




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