The Love Poem

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Aug 2003 · Edited 1 Oct 2003 · 5 comments

... o i'd love to love you from the outside in flesh for flesh skin for skin foreskin love me with all your organs i'd love to love you til you bleed i love it when you hurt me heal me save me love me my love for you is a vulva exploding blossoming b l o o m i n g on the inside where i'd love to stay i'd love to say i love you more than pain i love you with all my nerve endings i wish i knew how to love myself i love this poem i love the way my love burns on your tongue i'd love to love you til you come (apart) in my hands i'd love to let my taintedness desecrate your innocence for the first time all over again and again and again i love you i love you you like i love a poem with a good end -ing

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[7] horus8 31-Aug-03/12:37 PM Reply

It looks like your aeorta is about to blow a bubble. The end's a bit cliched.

[8] Y2kSlamPoet 31-Aug-03/7:42 PM Reply

Most of it is things ive heard before.. love is a subject that is cursed due to it being overdone, but you still managed to pull it off, somehow, with the heart thing and so on.. slightly out of order, but oh well, you get an 8.

[n/a] EAger to Offend 8-Sep-03/7:21 AM Reply

Sorry I didn't see a heart. I thought it was a female torso (...coming apart in my hands).

[0] smlink84 10-Sep-03/6:03 PM Reply

ah the pain ah...uha..aaaaaaaaaa..-0

[10] capachijim 24-Apr-04/8:13 PM Reply

Very beautiful