| Re: Erect Tongue of Excite by LuckyJoe |
8-Oct-03/12:49 PM |
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i love the rhymes. very good KC lllooovveee it!! yes i had too much cafine. hehehe = )
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| Re: My plea for fair voting. by LuckyJoe |
8-Oct-03/12:46 PM |
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hey don't worry KC. i am going through the 0s as well. though most of mine are blue. hehe you should read my poem Blue 0s are cowards. a little hard to read, but funny as hell. at least i think so. -10-
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| Re: The man, the world by INTRANSIT |
3-Oct-03/12:25 PM |
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cool i like this poem. -8-
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| Re: The March of Ones Death by LuckyJoe |
26-Sep-03/8:33 PM |
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maybe you should say "the recently departed" ?? but other than that i like it -8- = )
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| Re: Addiction causing stupidity by LuckyJoe |
19-Sep-03/11:02 AM |
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interesting......i like it, but KC it needs more flow. i don't want to sound like the rest of these mean spirited people, but it does need a little work, but i like it the way it is now. i am sure once you have time you will make it into a work of art. i have no doubt of your capabilities. = )
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| Re: a comment on Can you comment and vote? by LuckyJoe |
18-Sep-03/8:03 AM |
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that is ok i know how you feel. if i don't write it done i will forget it by the time i have a chance too. by the way the poem that is a semi-finalst is called 'The Rose' it is here on poemranker. if you get a chance look it up.
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| Re: Two years after... by LuckyJoe |
17-Sep-03/12:00 PM |
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aww how sweet. it brought tears to my eyes. *sniff sniff* 10
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| Re: Up for a game? by LuckyJoe |
17-Sep-03/11:57 AM |
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i will bless this poem with an 8.
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| Re: Can you comment and vote? by LuckyJoe |
17-Sep-03/11:54 AM |
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poemranker getting you down KC? well i hope it gets better. one of my poems is a semi-finalist in a contest going on to the big contest. i hope my poem wins. plus i am getting the poem in the contest published. probably.
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| Re: Voting on PoemRanker by LuckyJoe |
17-Sep-03/11:52 AM |
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| Re: When it Rains by LuckyJoe |
29-Aug-03/10:24 AM |
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i kinda like this one = ). well, got to go. i have a butt load of college homework to do. = )
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| Re: Addiction leaving by death by LuckyJoe |
29-Aug-03/10:22 AM |
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hey there! how have you been? i have been pretty good. i wrote a few new pieces of poetry. so far The Captian is the only one that has good marks. oh well = ) at least i am enjoying myself. ttyl
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| Re: An Unreal Iowa December Night by LuckyJoe |
8-Aug-03/5:55 AM |
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thank you for commenting on my poem. i really tried this time around lol. i think it took me nearly an hour to finally get it the way i wanted it. funny thing is it can be taken so many ways. l8r = )-
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| Re: Sex on bugs by LuckyJoe |
3-Aug-03/12:00 PM |
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sex on bugs......interesting.
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| Re: Desert Rain by Don-Quixote |
27-Jul-03/1:58 PM |
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| Re: Desert Rain by Don-Quixote |
27-Jul-03/1:57 PM |
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I like the imagine it provokes.
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| Re: Ranting Drunkard by Don-Quixote |
27-Jul-03/1:55 PM |
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This is a very interesting poem. I can almost see someone laying in bed drunk and about to pass out. 8
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| Re: CrapBeer by DurtKL |
25-Jul-03/1:21 PM |
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Thanks DurtKL for the comment. I think i will change it to Simple. By the way i wrote that poem around 3am in the morning. lol
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| Re: Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus |
24-Jul-03/11:57 PM |
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i really like this one. good work.
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| Re: a comment on Druid Girl Mizunderstood Poet of 1984 by 68.75.19.117 |
24-Jul-03/10:55 PM |
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i am sorry truly. i really love this poem and i am glad someone respects me. can ya forgive me?
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