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Desert Rain (Free verse) by Don-Quixote
[I am SupremeDreamer..] Simple moody tune.. Here I stand on a dune, Presperation driping away, Cheek to cheek it slips.. Smiling the sun, All its blaze going my way. All I can do is laugh, Because I ain't got nothin to say. The wind cooling My face, works tears Drying, and blown away. My hair, brown and worn Floating in the air. Me and this desert, One lovely pair. The rains going to come, Shutting out the suns rays. Just getting ready for Rainy days. Watch the drops Soak with the sand, And begin to river. The river is going To get bigger, and I'm not going to be Struck down from its Force.. That girl on the horizon.. Sunny eyes, soon we will Stand, and be the desert Once again..

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10644
Posted: July 24, 2003 6:49 AM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2003 6:49 AM PDT
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Comments:
[9] Druid_Girl_1984 @ 208.60.246.14 | 27-Jul-03/1:57 PM | Reply
I like the imagine it provokes.
[9] Druid_Girl_1984 @ 208.60.246.14 | 27-Jul-03/1:58 PM | Reply
shit! i meant image
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > Druid_Girl_1984 | 27-Jul-03/2:32 PM | Reply
Of course you did.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Jul-03/2:30 PM | Reply
[I am cheese man] Lord of the melt. lol.
You lie! You're bald! Bald! And you live in a hut in new guinnea.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 66.81.156.45 > horus8 | 27-Jul-03/2:39 PM | Reply
No, i dont lie. And, YES he IS me. because i made HIM.. relax jim, smoke another clit and have some more vodka...
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 27-Jul-03/3:14 PM | Reply
Don't mind if I do, can I whistle?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 66.81.156.45 > horus8 | 27-Jul-03/3:17 PM | Reply
sure man, i love that whistle.. reminds me of that one tune in Once Upon A Time In America.. i loved that movie..
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