Re: Ranting Drunkard by Don-Quixote |
27-Jul-03/1:55 PM |
This is a very interesting poem. I can almost see someone laying in bed drunk and about to pass out. 8
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Re: Desert Rain by Don-Quixote |
27-Jul-03/1:57 PM |
I like the imagine it provokes.
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Re: Desert Rain by Don-Quixote |
27-Jul-03/1:58 PM |
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Re: Sex on bugs by LuckyJoe |
3-Aug-03/12:00 PM |
sex on bugs......interesting.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Aug-03/9:49 PM |
I am going to edit this when i get time.
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Re: An Unreal Iowa December Night by LuckyJoe |
8-Aug-03/5:55 AM |
thank you for commenting on my poem. i really tried this time around lol. i think it took me nearly an hour to finally get it the way i wanted it. funny thing is it can be taken so many ways. l8r = )-
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regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Aug-03/7:50 AM |
hehe. nice poem. i know what you mean girl. = )
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Re: Addiction leaving by death by LuckyJoe |
29-Aug-03/10:22 AM |
hey there! how have you been? i have been pretty good. i wrote a few new pieces of poetry. so far The Captian is the only one that has good marks. oh well = ) at least i am enjoying myself. ttyl
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Re: When it Rains by LuckyJoe |
29-Aug-03/10:24 AM |
i kinda like this one = ). well, got to go. i have a butt load of college homework to do. = )
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Re: Voting on PoemRanker by LuckyJoe |
17-Sep-03/11:52 AM |
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Re: Can you comment and vote? by LuckyJoe |
17-Sep-03/11:54 AM |
poemranker getting you down KC? well i hope it gets better. one of my poems is a semi-finalist in a contest going on to the big contest. i hope my poem wins. plus i am getting the poem in the contest published. probably.
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Re: Up for a game? by LuckyJoe |
17-Sep-03/11:57 AM |
i will bless this poem with an 8.
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Re: Two years after... by LuckyJoe |
17-Sep-03/12:00 PM |
aww how sweet. it brought tears to my eyes. *sniff sniff* 10
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regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Sep-03/7:58 AM |
I will fix this one shortly. i posted it here so i could see more clearly my mistakes. thanks for all who voted and commented.
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Re: Addiction causing stupidity by LuckyJoe |
19-Sep-03/11:02 AM |
interesting......i like it, but KC it needs more flow. i don't want to sound like the rest of these mean spirited people, but it does need a little work, but i like it the way it is now. i am sure once you have time you will make it into a work of art. i have no doubt of your capabilities. = )
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Re: The March of Ones Death by LuckyJoe |
26-Sep-03/8:33 PM |
maybe you should say "the recently departed" ?? but other than that i like it -8- = )
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Re: The man, the world by INTRANSIT |
3-Oct-03/12:25 PM |
cool i like this poem. -8-
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Re: My plea for fair voting. by LuckyJoe |
8-Oct-03/12:46 PM |
hey don't worry KC. i am going through the 0s as well. though most of mine are blue. hehe you should read my poem Blue 0s are cowards. a little hard to read, but funny as hell. at least i think so. -10-
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Re: Erect Tongue of Excite by LuckyJoe |
8-Oct-03/12:49 PM |
i love the rhymes. very good KC lllooovveee it!! yes i had too much cafine. hehehe = )
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regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Oct-03/10:20 AM |
please no more blue 0s if you do not like my work then be brave enough to say so. that is all i ask. have a good day ^_^
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