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Erect Tongue of Excite (Free verse) by LuckyJoe Came forth drawn by attraction,
Retracted hearing rough terrain,
Thought vocal impediment was retardation.
Sound not smooth as silk,
But the message sooths the soul,
Found that out after walking away.
An erect tongue filled with excite,
Stammers and stutters,
Words donât come out right.
Calm and collective,
In the office words pronounces right,
Sentences formed without a fight.
Forth coming chance number two,
Touch caused your entice,
Tongue again erect with excite.
Upon quivering lip bite,
All effort forth to talk correct,
Express freely without neglect.
Up the ladder:
Laundry Day
Down the ladder:
My Interesting Life
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Posted: October 8, 2003 12:05 PM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2003 12:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.6723537 Overall Rank: 2040 Comments:
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Druid_Girl_1984 @ 209.214.109.67
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8-Oct-03/12:49 PM
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i love the rhymes. very good KC lllooovveee it!! yes i had too much cafine. hehehe = )
A bowl of solid gravy.
Is that a good thing of a bad thing? I'd think it was a good thing gone bad. Solid gravy that is.
the poem bites but the title sucks like a long distance lover 6
7 even
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