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Erect Tongue of Excite (Free verse) by LuckyJoe
Came forth drawn by attraction, Retracted hearing rough terrain, Thought vocal impediment was retardation. Sound not smooth as silk, But the message sooths the soul, Found that out after walking away. An erect tongue filled with excite, Stammers and stutters, Words don’t come out right. Calm and collective, In the office words pronounces right, Sentences formed without a fight. Forth coming chance number two, Touch caused your entice, Tongue again erect with excite. Upon quivering lip bite, All effort forth to talk correct, Express freely without neglect.

Up the ladder: Laundry Day
Down the ladder: Like a Whore {erotic}

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2040
Posted: October 8, 2003 12:05 PM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2003 12:05 PM PDT
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Comments:
[10] Druid_Girl_1984 @ 209.214.109.67 | 8-Oct-03/12:49 PM | Reply
i love the rhymes. very good KC lllooovveee it!! yes i had too much cafine. hehehe = )
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Oct-03/8:12 AM | Reply
A bowl of solid gravy.
[n/a] LuckyJoe @ 206.72.7.62 > horus8 | 10-Oct-03/1:45 AM | Reply
Is that a good thing of a bad thing? I'd think it was a good thing gone bad. Solid gravy that is.
[7] Caducus @ 62.105.119.105 | 9-Oct-03/8:48 AM | Reply
the poem bites but the title sucks like a long distance lover 6
[7] Caducus @ 62.105.119.105 | 9-Oct-03/8:48 AM | Reply
7 even
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