poemranker ::When it Rains by LuckyJoe

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Free verse № 62412

When it Rains

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Aug 2003 · 1 comment

Looking out the window with sorrow, Tears fall, pouring from eyes, Days like these Chinese torture, Head against the window, tap, tap tap… Only miss you when it rains, Cooped up wishing to walk outside, Headaches in my brain, All due to the rain, Little droplets fall, Gloomy days like these remembering, Grasp for a hand no longer there, Walk to the door expecting you to follow. Fall to knees knowing you’re gone, Reach to the Heavens in plea, Stop the rain can’t handle this torture, Each time it rains, Drip…Drip…Drip…

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[10] Druid_Girl_1984 29-Aug-03/10:24 AM Reply
i kinda like this one = ). well, got to go. i have a butt load of college homework to do. = )