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When it Rains (Free verse) by LuckyJoe
Looking out the window with sorrow,
Tears fall, pouring from eyes,
Days like these Chinese torture,
Head against the window, tap, tap tapâ¦
Only miss you when it rains,
Cooped up wishing to walk outside,
Headaches in my brain,
All due to the rain,
Little droplets fall,
Gloomy days like these remembering,
Grasp for a hand no longer there,
Walk to the door expecting you to follow.
Fall to knees knowing youâre gone,
Reach to the Heavens in plea,
Stop the rain canât handle this torture,
Each time it rains,
Dripâ¦Dripâ¦Dripâ¦
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8950
Posted: August 27, 2003 8:43 AM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2003 8:43 AM PDT
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