poemranker ::Can you comment and vote? by LuckyJoe

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Free verse № 65350

Can you comment and vote?

by LuckyJoe

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Sep 2003 · 12 comments

Is it to hard too comprehend, Or is it laziness of which you depend, Come one come all… You’ve read so now vote. A zero is quite fine, Its something to call mine! If you’re looking within my mind, Give a little back with a comment. A ten is just trash, If not accompanied by a remark, Is what I ask, too much for you to comprehend?

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0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

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9 votes so far. Yours would make 10.9 votes so far

12 comments

[4] nentwined 16-Sep-03/7:05 AM Reply
"to" hard? perhaps.

"of which you depend"? ew.

"one" and "come" should be split by a comma.

the flow is rocky. to a point? I see the one point, but the poem's got bits sticking out every which way, detracting (I think) from the spearhead.

but a cute idea.
[n/a] LuckyJoe › nentwined 16-Sep-03/1:04 PM Reply
I'll give this comment a look over tonight when I have time to sit down and write. Then I'll work on the poem and repost. Thank you for the great comment...gives lots of ideas and information. *hats off to you*
[n/a] richa 16-Sep-03/7:19 AM Reply
I'll give you a zero if you really want.

I guess you want comments on your 'serious' poems rathey than this one right?
[n/a] LuckyJoe › richa 16-Sep-03/1:03 PM Reply
Yah! I zero just because I wanted it...rock on like stinky gym socks!

Yeah, on the other ones would be correct.
[5] http://mulberryfairy 16-Sep-03/9:45 AM Reply
I vote on everything, but you have to do something of higher quality than this (or something more repulsive) to get a comment every time!
[n/a] LuckyJoe › http://mulberryfairy 16-Sep-03/1:02 PM Reply
I know you vote on everything and I thank you for that. The comment isn't all important ALL the time. But most of us are here to share and get better. Hard to do that without comments saying whats wrong with the work.
[1] Garrett S Sexton 16-Sep-03/1:49 PM Reply
A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1
[1] Garrett S Sexton 16-Sep-03/1:49 PM Reply
A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1
[1] Garrett S Sexton 16-Sep-03/1:49 PM Reply
A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1
[8] Druid_Girl_1984 17-Sep-03/11:54 AM Reply
poemranker getting you down KC? well i hope it gets better. one of my poems is a semi-finalist in a contest going on to the big contest. i hope my poem wins. plus i am getting the poem in the contest published. probably.
[n/a] LuckyJoe › Druid_Girl_1984 17-Sep-03/12:30 PM Reply
Congrats hun. Na poemranker isn't getting me down. I've just had a lack of things to write about. Bad choice of words, you know how I never have a lack to write about. Just all the good stuff hits me at bad times. I don't get the few starting lines wrote down. Then when I have a chance to finally write something down I've forgot them and can't remember them for the life of me. So I just wrote...something...
[8] Druid_Girl_1984 › LuckyJoe 18-Sep-03/8:03 AM Reply
that is ok i know how you feel. if i don't write it done i will forget it by the time i have a chance too. by the way the poem that is a semi-finalst is called 'The Rose' it is here on poemranker. if you get a chance look it up.