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Can you comment and vote? (Free verse) by LuckyJoe Is it to hard too comprehend,
Or is it laziness of which you depend,
Come one come allâ¦
Youâve read so now vote.
A zero is quite fine,
Its something to call mine!
If youâre looking within my mind,
Give a little back with a comment.
A ten is just trash,
If not accompanied by a remark,
Is what I ask,
too much for you to comprehend?
Up the ladder:
infection of birth
Down the ladder:
Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Posted: September 16, 2003 4:42 AM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2003 4:42 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.3333335 Overall Rank: 13080 Comments:
I'll give you a zero if you really want.
I guess you want comments on your 'serious' poems rathey than this one right?
Yah! I zero just because I wanted it...rock on like stinky gym socks!
Yeah, on the other ones would be correct.
I vote on everything, but you have to do something of higher quality than this (or something more repulsive) to get a comment every time!
I know you vote on everything and I thank you for that. The comment isn't all important ALL the time. But most of us are here to share and get better. Hard to do that without comments saying whats wrong with the work.
A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1
A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1
A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1
poemranker getting you down KC? well i hope it gets better. one of my poems is a semi-finalist in a contest going on to the big contest. i hope my poem wins. plus i am getting the poem in the contest published. probably.
Congrats hun. Na poemranker isn't getting me down. I've just had a lack of things to write about. Bad choice of words, you know how I never have a lack to write about. Just all the good stuff hits me at bad times. I don't get the few starting lines wrote down. Then when I have a chance to finally write something down I've forgot them and can't remember them for the life of me. So I just wrote...something...
that is ok i know how you feel. if i don't write it done i will forget it by the time i have a chance too. by the way the poem that is a semi-finalst is called 'The Rose' it is here on poemranker. if you get a chance look it up.
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"of which you depend"? ew.
"one" and "come" should be split by a comma.
the flow is rocky. to a point? I see the one point, but the poem's got bits sticking out every which way, detracting (I think) from the spearhead.
but a cute idea.