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infection of birth (Haiku) by T'ien to love to lose to have symptoms of a disease long forgotten
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Posted: January 8, 2003 6:27 AM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2003 6:27 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.3333335 Overall Rank: 13074 Comments:
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MuDvAyNe @ 212.219.142.161
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8-Jan-03/6:28 AM
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how pointless is this dearest mikey, for you have conjoured up vile thoughts into my head, I LIKE IT
to eat to drink to be merry...
"Beer is proof that God Loves Man" - Ben Franklin that guy in the Green Mile was infected with life, too. the words are nice, but perhaps this "haiku" should've been infected with line breaks. Stiil I give it an 8.
i don really no wot a haiku is honestly
dont worry mikey honey, neither do i
haiku?
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