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infection of birth (Haiku) by T'ien

to love to lose to have symptoms of a disease long forgotten life

hipster flare 8-Jan-03/9:22 AM
to eat to drink to be merry...
"Beer is proof that God Loves Man" - Ben Franklin
that guy in the Green Mile was infected with life, too.
the words are nice, but perhaps this "haiku" should've been infected with line breaks. Stiil I give it an 8.




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