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Druid Girl Mizunderstood Poet of 1984 (Free verse) by 68.75.19.117
"Well, first off i would like to tell you i am 19yrs, white, and female. My religion is no concern of yours. I believe what i believe and you believe what you believe. Enough said about that. I do not like to be mean or insult others. Not my way. Though it might be yours. As on old saying goes "If you can't say something nice then do not say anything at all." Of course that is just my oppinion. I know my poetry is not as grand as Shakespear or William Blake's, but hey all poets had to start some where. I am young and learning. If you want to help, then give helpful critizism other wise i will just ignore you and delete your comments. I will continue to write and change as the years go on, but i will never give up what i believe makes me unique. If i did then i would not be me and quite frankly i love being the person i am. You might not like the person you are, but that is no fault of mine. So therefore do not take it out on me, because i will not be your scapegoat. Go find some other newbie. For this newbie is standing her ground and will continue to write the way she writes. Ta-ta for now." Her religion is now concern of ours She believes in what she believes in And we believe in what we believe in I belive her to be mizunderstood Like Christina Agueiliera She just wants to be heard She is beautiful and a fighter. I respected her declaration Against the evil poet She stood her ground against The eagle headed hawk She has many special qualities Like the Beastmaster she can speak to Every living being. Like the bluebirds who looked so gloom Singing their mournful tune And in her mind she sails the seven seas with Johnny Depp in the Pirates of the Carribean But that whore deleted my comments So quit your whining bitch Silence!

Up the ladder: Her Sleeping Form

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.3073616
Overall Rank: 3630
Posted: July 24, 2003 10:28 PM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2003 10:28 PM PDT
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[n/a] DurtKL @ 68.75.19.117 | 24-Jul-03/10:30 PM | Reply
This poem started off as a poem of respect
and i do still respect you
but you deleted my comments?!
and it wasn't even that mean
I was helping you out
:(
*tear
[10] Druid_Girl_1984 @ 209.214.109.169 > DurtKL | 24-Jul-03/10:55 PM | Reply
i am sorry truly. i really love this poem and i am glad someone respects me. can ya forgive me?
[n/a] 68.75.19.117 @ 68.75.19.117 > Druid_Girl_1984 | 24-Jul-03/10:58 PM | Reply
LoL
stop with the PR control please
stick to what you did
don't fucking give in to anyone
don't worry about me
i won't spite you with blue zeros
[10] Druid_Girl_1984 @ 209.214.109.169 | 24-Jul-03/10:48 PM | Reply
hehe that is truly funny. i might have deleted them, but at least i read them. ; ) 10
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