Re: vacation by geewhiz1962	7-Jul-03/8:16 PM
the rewrite is alot better than the original. heres an 8. btw, you really need to have a better attitude concerning commentry, because changing titles to erase a low vote is a pathetic response. Plus, giving me a low rating when i respond to it by sticking a zero on your work is childish... doesnt make you look intelligent. dont take this comment to be pompous in nature, but i do admit sadly that it does seem that way. Im just trying to give you some advice not to step on you, but to help you.
Re: 910 Via Padova, Claremont, Ca. (Mike Piazza Edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	7-Jul-03/8:09 PM
hrmmm. cool adaptation yoda. ;P 9.
Re: Things by MrsGretchen	7-Jul-03/8:07 PM
Not bad, good work. It could use a better introduction though.. and a better title. heres a 7
Re: the power that be by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/8:05 PM
dood.. you need to realize that you dont have a fucking inkling of understanding concerning the subject.. plus your limping poetically with how your attempting to poetically write about it.
Re: blackhole by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/8:01 PM
Yeah.. i dont intent to be mean or insulting.. but bachus is right... your recent pieces are.. crappy. The ideas are good, just the way you presented them suck.
Re: the godself within by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/7:58 PM
the title and the poem have nothing to do with each other. you failed miserably to make a poem about the godself within. blessed with 3
Re: oh god please help me by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/7:55 PM
"It is only my refection" reflection "but their simply appears to be," their should be There Nice poem, though its a little confusing, you need to be more descriptive. You have alot to work on, but you have potential. Blessed with 6
Re: Crowning Achievement by MrsGretchen	7-Jul-03/7:49 PM
I really like this poem alot. It is written well, but theres lots of room for improvement. blessed with 8.
Re: My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I	7-Jul-03/7:23 PM
OK let me inform everyone: I DID NOT WRITE THIS CRAP. TWO: Im going to ask that this username be DELETED. Im not going to have some imposter attempting to make me look like an idiot. Also, settle, i think your the one responsible for this, and its not smart to piss me off. If im wrong about my assumptions, forgive me. btw, heres a zero.
Re: Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom	7-Jul-03/7:13 PM
Haiku.. ah, i never really had much practice, actually no practice is more like it, with haikus.. but yeah, abandon the haiku idea or remake this.. could be a damn good start for a better poem though. i wont vote on this for the moment.
Re: To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	7-Jul-03/7:09 PM
Hrmm.. i remninds me of the table of contents of a magazine.. hrmm.. can i be allowed to ponder a title for this one too? good work btw. blessed with 10
Re: a comment on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	7-Jul-03/4:31 PM
Dont see why, but your welcome. ;)
Re: a comment on The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme	7-Jul-03/4:27 PM
yeah, i know, i have a problem with being cheap when it comes to rhymes. ;P
Re: a comment on Ocular Photoalbum by DreamerSupreme	7-Jul-03/4:24 PM
Yeah, so you now see i can play the emotion guitar. ;P
Re: a comment on Ocular Photoalbum by DreamerSupreme	7-Jul-03/4:23 PM
Heh. dont poke on those particular emotions of mine. ;P
Re: lucid building peace by nolan	6-Jul-03/9:03 AM
Over all i enjoyed the poem, but i think the piece before ...death is confusing to a point.. or thats my opinion anyway. heres a 7.
Re: Rude Awakenings by OneFingerAnswer	6-Jul-03/8:39 AM
Damn good. Very descriptive and well worded. blessed with 10.
Re: Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8	6-Jul-03/8:33 AM
Yep, I love this poem.. muse did some strange whine on my poetic soup comments section about not wanting to vote because of his/hers work being mutilated.. and when i saw this, i laughed my ass off in joy.. blessed with a 10, good fucking job!!!
Re: 195.157.153.253 by <~>	6-Jul-03/8:14 AM
lol.. yeah. still have wierd thoughts that i am settle? i hope not after looking at the ips, because then id start to feel like alice in wonderland, where i dont know who i am or where i am. nice poem, heres a 10.
Re: a comment on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	6-Jul-03/6:14 AM
Good suggestions, but im going to keep those parts as i originaly wrote them. Thanks for your thoughts though, they are always appreciated.