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the power that be (Free verse) by crwncka1
Just as love created me, I now send out a command, A call far out in the eons, For the mighty force of love. Its strength is the one most powerful, In all of the universe that be. For nothing may now overcome, All this love I have bottled up, Inside for the one girl I truly love. With the power of nuclear energy, I now will send out a shock wave of love, That will crush all obstacles in place, Truly move the highest mountains, So my soul may finally have, The true love that is due back to me. For god only knows my patience, But that is just fine with me, As i now truly believe, In the power of the spiraling cosmos, Which creates a massive funnel, That fuels the whole universe, Makes it tick, And is the only true power that be. I speak of love. So now all that is left for me to do, Is just sit here in place, For now my one true love, Way has been lit, To ensure return back to me.

Up the ladder: One Love
Down the ladder: Darkness

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9570
Posted: July 7, 2003 11:10 AM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2003 11:10 AM PDT
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[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-Jul-03/2:20 PM | Reply
That's not the universe ticking gumshoe that's the sound of poets everywhere eating their time pieces, so as to forget when they read this.
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 68.75.28.126 | 7-Jul-03/6:29 PM | Reply
"What do you get when you cross an owl with a bungee chord? My ass. Nyah, haha, haha, haha, ENOUGH!! "
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.168.51 | 7-Jul-03/8:05 PM | Reply
dood.. you need to realize that you dont have a fucking inkling of understanding concerning the subject.. plus your limping poetically with how your attempting to poetically write about it.
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