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Things (Free verse) by MrsGretchen Bright lights flash
Sirens scream
A small child cries
For a number of things
People racing
Finish line unseen
City streets awaken
Then a victim screams
Newspapers reporting
Movies glorify
News anchors boring
Same old news, same old lines
Housewives drugging
Husbands on booze
Children dealing
What do they have to lose
Bright lights flashing
Sirens scream
A small child cries
For a number of things
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Posted: July 7, 2003 12:33 PM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2003 12:33 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.03842 Overall Rank: 7197 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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7-Jul-03/1:04 PM
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Another.
I like your half rhyme, things and screams. And I like the final two lines too
Not bad, good work. It could use a better introduction though.. and a better title. heres a 7
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