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Ocular Photoalbum (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme Tear filled eyes stare
silently, in pain,
at a faded photo:
Memory spills
a river of ashes.
The last remainder
of the man.
He once lived
to stand still
and smile...
No smile existed
when the eyes
snapped the image
of a frail shriveled
corpse they once called
Papa..
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Up the ladder:
In (ghazal)
Down the ladder:
The Girl Who Is Gone
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Posted: July 6, 2003 4:55 PM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2003 5:20 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2241178 Overall Rank: 4270 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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6-Jul-03/5:58 PM
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Daddy, oh sweet dear daddy.
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.168.51
> horus8
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7-Jul-03/4:23 PM
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Heh. dont poke on those particular emotions of mine. ;P
I like the way you gently tap on the emotional heart string here. Very nice poem. -8-
Yeah, so you now see i can play the emotion guitar. ;P
nice poem
it treads nicely
thanks
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