|
|
blackhole (Free verse) by crwncka1
The evilness I feel,
though the dark sunlight sky,
comes from a place,
where nothing is real.
This place I speak of,
is where I reside,
for it is the black hole that looms,
so deep within us.
Its a place where none like to go,
but I exist there.
Though I simply can't explain,
this trapped feeling I have,
as words simply won't describe,
what i am trying to see,
though this black void tunnel,
what i am in search of,
is to feel the release,
that would fill me up,
make me whole,
in solving this mystery,
that is all of who i am.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
0 | 0 |
9 |
|
0 | 0 |
8 |
|
1 | 0 |
7 |
|
1 | 0 |
6 |
|
0 | 0 |
5 |
|
0 | 0 |
4 |
|
0 | 0 |
3 |
|
0 | 0 |
2 |
|
0 | 0 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
2 | 0 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10532
Posted: July 7, 2003 9:42 AM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2003 9:42 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
185 view(s)
|
this poem doesn't seem to speak. It is just a few sentences strung together