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Starting Over (Free verse) by justjay Circular motion-
spinning endlessly-
end over end-
leaving to start
starting to leave-
endless lines
passed down through time-
twirling endlessly,
through a hole-
the abyss-
controlled only by the motion-
spinning
spinning
til everything just stops-
reset to normal-
to just start all over again.
Up the ladder:
blackhole
Down the ladder:
Missing
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Posted: August 10, 2003 1:12 PM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2003 8:28 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10527 Comments:
I would suggest a different more assertive user name such as Cyclopsis, or The Maskallero, or for braver sorts THE ADVENTUREs' OF ROCK HARD CORN BREAD or Sir Sherbert.
I specifically chose the name justjay cuz it's just the way i am. i don't need some "more assertive" way of saying who i am. I can say my whole personality and whole life in just the words just jay. that's all i am. . .
Sadly, I kinda like it. But have you ever seen an abyss?
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Lacking in any real originality though