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Starting Over

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Aug 2003 · Edited 18 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

Circular motion- spinning endlessly- end over end- leaving to start starting to leave- endless lines passed down through time- twirling endlessly, through a hole- the abyss- controlled only by the motion- spinning spinning til everything just stops- reset to normal- to just start all over again.

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[6] richa 19-Aug-03/7:46 AM Reply

OK flows kind of well. Well communicated.
Lacking in any real originality though

[n/a] Bachus 19-Aug-03/8:11 PM Reply

I would suggest a different more assertive user name such as Cyclopsis, or The Maskallero, or for braver sorts THE ADVENTUREs' OF ROCK HARD CORN BREAD or Sir Sherbert.

[n/a] justjay › Bachus 3-Nov-03/12:05 PM Reply

I specifically chose the name justjay cuz it's just the way i am. i don't need some "more assertive" way of saying who i am. I can say my whole personality and whole life in just the words just jay. that's all i am. . .

[5] fevriere 7-May-04/1:36 AM Reply

Sadly, I kinda like it. But have you ever seen an abyss?