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Starting Over (Free verse) by justjay

Circular motion- spinning endlessly- end over end- leaving to start starting to leave- endless lines passed down through time- twirling endlessly, through a hole- the abyss- controlled only by the motion- spinning spinning til everything just stops- reset to normal- to just start all over again.

fevriere 7-May-04/1:36 AM
Sadly, I kinda like it. But have you ever seen an abyss?




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