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Starting Over (Free verse) by justjay

Circular motion- spinning endlessly- end over end- leaving to start starting to leave- endless lines passed down through time- twirling endlessly, through a hole- the abyss- controlled only by the motion- spinning spinning til everything just stops- reset to normal- to just start all over again.

Bachus 19-Aug-03/8:11 PM
I would suggest a different more assertive user name such as Cyclopsis, or The Maskallero, or for braver sorts THE ADVENTUREs' OF ROCK HARD CORN BREAD or Sir Sherbert.




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