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blackhole (Free verse) by crwncka1

The evilness I feel, though the dark sunlight sky, comes from a place, where nothing is real. This place I speak of, is where I reside, for it is the black hole that looms, so deep within us. Its a place where none like to go, but I exist there. Though I simply can't explain, this trapped feeling I have, as words simply won't describe, what i am trying to see, though this black void tunnel, what i am in search of, is to feel the release, that would fill me up, make me whole, in solving this mystery, that is all of who i am.

richa 7-Jul-03/11:01 AM
I know you can't explain the trapped feeling. But please try

this poem doesn't seem to speak. It is just a few sentences strung together




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