| Re: My Single Hatred by cleverdevice |
3-Aug-03/3:26 PM |
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yeah.. i cant stand any insects myself. 8
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| Re: Parades for cripples (Shit bag) by Thome Plumpe by Bachus |
3-Aug-03/3:24 PM |
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LMAO.. btw, nice going with the repetition of the plum.. but it cant cure everyone man.. some people are just too thick for the fruits medicine to sink in. 10
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| Re: a comment on A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote |
3-Aug-03/3:20 PM |
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I figured this would have tickled your fancy. ;P im a bit dizzy, all this weight lifting is making my body feel like a ripe melon..
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| Re: Grampa Morris by http://bandgeek |
2-Aug-03/11:55 PM |
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well done. blessed with 10.
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| Re: I Can See the Sunset in Her Eyes by justjay |
2-Aug-03/2:00 PM |
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Let me tell you, when your super dreamin a girlfriend, thats the sign that youve gone too far and need a super large dose of reality.. ;) go out get some pussy.
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| Re: Perfection by justjay |
2-Aug-03/1:58 PM |
cherry on top of a well iced cake..
wheres the meat? heh. 8.
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| Re: Mind Puddle by justjay |
2-Aug-03/1:57 PM |
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cloths or clothes? take your pick. dont worry, i make a million spelling mistakes in a day. well done, i enjoyed reading it. 8
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| Re: a comment on Malcontent by EAger to Offend |
2-Aug-03/1:48 PM |
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we can always sell the idea to webster.. ;)
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| Re: POEM XXII by DonCalo |
2-Aug-03/1:45 PM |
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verboten.. forbidden love.. ah.. cool, i learned a new word. Nice poem, welcome to ranker ville. blessed with nine.
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| Re: a comment on Malcontent by EAger to Offend |
2-Aug-03/11:48 AM |
ah, i thought it was incestors.
well, uniquity doesnt have my vote.. i say stick with the original spelling, but again its your poem, its good nevertheless.
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| Re: She Won't Wait by EAger to Offend |
2-Aug-03/11:41 AM |
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| Re: Malcontent by EAger to Offend |
2-Aug-03/11:35 AM |
insestors - webster doesn't recognize this word.. what is it sposed to mean? Same for uniquity.
other than that, this is a gigantic leap from your other works, im impressed. Blessed with 10
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| Re: Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit |
2-Aug-03/10:00 AM |
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I enjoyed it.. blessed with 8
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| Re: Charades by Thom |
2-Aug-03/9:50 AM |
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bleh, bored me dead.. couldnt even finish the first two stanzas before i wanted to ram my skull into my monitor and electrify my soul.. 4
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| Re: Clay Man by eliastemplar |
2-Aug-03/9:49 AM |
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| Re: To My Future Wife by http://bandgeek |
2-Aug-03/9:44 AM |
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lmao. well man, you no longer need my chemical twist to inject the funny potion into your work.. you suceeded beautifully. 10.
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| Re: a comment on Pencil Dust [revised] by SupremeDreamer |
31-Jul-03/8:24 AM |
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hey, woah alright, relax.. i can write well, yes, i can, but im not some fucking expert or pro, quite frankly i dont even have a highschool education, my grammar and spelling is shit, and im just starting to write better than my usual teenage angst bullshit. What do you expect? eh? for me to write perfect beautiful masterpieces each time? im WORKING to get to that point man.. im quite happy with my improvement aswell, though i admit, my latest writings are lacking the bang of my usual.. i admit that.
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| Re: a comment on Deranged Sailor: Sea Sickness [revised] by SupremeDreamer |
31-Jul-03/8:12 AM |
eh. hrmm. nice url.. hey.. that can be very usefull.. maybe this isnt a lashing..
but can i ask, wtf made you suddenly explode and start commenting and voting on all my stuff? was is something i said? its quite sudden.. you been holding back or what?
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| Re: a comment on Pencil Dust [revised] by SupremeDreamer |
31-Jul-03/8:08 AM |
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did i piss you off particularly? eh? recently? because for some reason im getting a lashing.. but its not amusing, not does it even piss me off.. its just stupid.. but continue, i dont give a shit really.
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| Re: a comment on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Jul-03/5:25 AM |
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ah shit.. women.. thank god im not involved with one at the moment.. always a pain..
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