on My Single Hatred by cleverdevice
3 Aug 2003, 3:26 PM
yeah.. i cant stand any insects myself. 8
on Parades for cripples (Shit bag) by Thome Plumpe by Bachus
3 Aug 2003, 3:24 PM
LMAO.. btw, nice going with the repetition of the plum.. but it cant cure everyone man.. some people are just too thick for the fruits medicine to sink in. 10
replying on A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote
3 Aug 2003, 3:20 PM
I figured this would have tickled your fancy. ;P im a bit dizzy, all this weight lifting is making my body feel like a ripe melon..
on Grampa Morris by http://bandgeek
2 Aug 2003, 11:55 PM
well done. blessed with 10.
on I Can See the Sunset in Her Eyes by justjay
2 Aug 2003, 2:00 PM
Let me tell you, when your super dreamin a girlfriend, thats the sign that youve gone too far and need a super large dose of reality.. ;) go out get some pussy.
on Perfection by justjay
2 Aug 2003, 1:58 PM
cherry on top of a well iced cake..
wheres the meat? heh. 8.
wheres the meat? heh. 8.
on Mind Puddle by justjay
2 Aug 2003, 1:57 PM
cloths or clothes? take your pick. dont worry, i make a million spelling mistakes in a day. well done, i enjoyed reading it. 8
replying on Malcontent by EAger to Offend
2 Aug 2003, 1:48 PM
we can always sell the idea to webster.. ;)
replying on Malcontent by EAger to Offend
2 Aug 2003, 11:48 AM
ah, i thought it was incestors.
well, uniquity doesnt have my vote.. i say stick with the original spelling, but again its your poem, its good nevertheless.
well, uniquity doesnt have my vote.. i say stick with the original spelling, but again its your poem, its good nevertheless.
on She Won't Wait by EAger to Offend
2 Aug 2003, 11:41 AM
Well done. 10.
on Malcontent by EAger to Offend
2 Aug 2003, 11:35 AM
insestors - webster doesn't recognize this word.. what is it sposed to mean? Same for uniquity.
other than that, this is a gigantic leap from your other works, im impressed. Blessed with 10
other than that, this is a gigantic leap from your other works, im impressed. Blessed with 10
on Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit
2 Aug 2003, 10:00 AM
I enjoyed it.. blessed with 8
on Clay Man by eliastemplar
2 Aug 2003, 9:49 AM
Amusing. blessed with 9.
on To My Future Wife by http://bandgeek
2 Aug 2003, 9:44 AM
lmao. well man, you no longer need my chemical twist to inject the funny potion into your work.. you suceeded beautifully. 10.
replying on Pencil Dust [revised] by SupremeDreamer
31 Jul 2003, 8:24 AM
hey, woah alright, relax.. i can write well, yes, i can, but im not some fucking expert or pro, quite frankly i dont even have a highschool education, my grammar and spelling is shit, and im just starting to write better than my usual teenage angst bullshit. What do you expect? eh? for me to write perfect beautiful masterpieces each time? im WORKING to get to that point man.. im quite happy with my improvement aswell, though i admit, my latest writings are lacking the bang of my usual.. i admit that.
replying on Deranged Sailor: Sea Sickness [revised] by SupremeDreamer
31 Jul 2003, 8:12 AM
eh. hrmm. nice url.. hey.. that can be very usefull.. maybe this isnt a lashing..
but can i ask, wtf made you suddenly explode and start commenting and voting on all my stuff? was is something i said? its quite sudden.. you been holding back or what?
but can i ask, wtf made you suddenly explode and start commenting and voting on all my stuff? was is something i said? its quite sudden.. you been holding back or what?
replying on Pencil Dust [revised] by SupremeDreamer
31 Jul 2003, 8:08 AM
did i piss you off particularly? eh? recently? because for some reason im getting a lashing.. but its not amusing, not does it even piss me off.. its just stupid.. but continue, i dont give a shit really.
replying on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer
31 Jul 2003, 5:25 AM
ah shit.. women.. thank god im not involved with one at the moment.. always a pain..