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Clay Man (Free verse) by eliastemplar He was a clay man
So I twisted his arms into obscene positions.
Then I made him a generous and flexible woman
And I smashed them together.
Just for fun.
Up the ladder:
Cliche
Down the ladder:
Working at the Garden Market
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Posted: August 1, 2003 9:14 AM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2003 9:30 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.25 Overall Rank: 925 Comments:
flouroscope
interesting....at least
Ang galing... 10
Amusing. blessed with 9.
I like it, provocative images of playing God. Creation vs destruction. As a Marine don't you get the piss ripped out of you for being a poet?
lol
There are deffinately stereotypes associated with Marines, but we come from all walks of life. My fellow Marines nick named me Smokejumper because I used to be a fire fighter for the Forrestry Service.
I'll admit that I'm not a typical Marine. However, I think you'd be hard pressed to accurately define the typical Marine. Thanks for the comments, Lcpl.Busby,B.W.
a very pithy version of Genesis?
Very nice.
Love it!
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"Generouse" is a French word, pronounced "ZHJON-AIR-OOZ" and meaning "Fuck Bunny"
Not to be confused with the English word, "generous".