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Clay Man (Free verse) by eliastemplar

He was a clay man So I twisted his arms into obscene positions. Then I made him a generous and flexible woman And I smashed them together. Just for fun.

cleverdevice 4-Aug-03/6:48 AM
I like it, provocative images of playing God. Creation vs destruction. As a Marine don't you get the piss ripped out of you for being a poet?




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