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POEM XXII

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Aug 2003 · 5 comments

verboten love devours me my body hungers for the taste lips drip with words of honey they extinguish your craving

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[9] SupremeDreamer 2-Aug-03/1:45 PM Reply
verboten.. forbidden love.. ah.. cool, i learned a new word. Nice poem, welcome to ranker ville. blessed with nine.
[9] http://mulberryfairy 2-Aug-03/7:37 PM Reply
So, you were so over the top horny that you came in your pants and turned the other person off? I really can't tell what extinguished your audience's craving.
[n/a] DonCalo › http://mulberryfairy 3-Aug-03/9:04 PM Reply
lol..interesting interpretation but not my feelings

more along the lines of not being able to express our feelings for each other....last two lines express our relief when we finally can...or if i suppose
[8] Bachus 3-Aug-03/3:12 PM Reply
"Verboten love devours me
My body hungers for the taste
Lips drip with words of honey
They extinguish your craving."
Could improve this.
[n/a] DonCalo › Bachus 3-Aug-03/9:04 PM Reply
suggestions?