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POEM XXII (Other) by DonCalo

verboten love devours me my body hungers for the taste lips drip with words of honey they extinguish your craving

DonCalo 3-Aug-03/9:04 PM
lol..interesting interpretation but not my feelings

more along the lines of not being able to express our feelings for each other....last two lines express our relief when we finally can...or if i suppose




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