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She Won't Wait (Lyric) by EAger to Offend
Goddess knows the weak spots and she stabs them tenderly Enough that I'll still love her even when she's hating me caressing like a bastard file against the grain of skin mulched flesh for discontent to be fertilized with sin My life crept up on me so fast now it slips away Bleeding from the mourning only living for today bohemianism rears it's crazy head again i do what i gotta do Life is god and She won't wait

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5377
Posted: August 2, 2003 11:33 AM PDT; Last modified: August 2, 2003 11:33 AM PDT
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[10] SupremeDreamer @ 69.19.179.124 | 2-Aug-03/11:41 AM | Reply
Well done. 10.
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