| Re: a comment on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Jul-03/4:55 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Jul-03/4:26 AM |
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jeez. well, i hope it turns into a good outcome.
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| Re: a comment on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Jul-03/4:17 AM |
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yikes, who stepped on your toes?
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| Re: a comment on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Jul-03/4:14 AM |
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hmmm. it suits this piece.
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| Re: Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Jul-03/4:10 AM |
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lol. nice. btw, deadication, did you intentionally spell it that way? seems like it, just wanted to make sure first before i say something stupid. 9
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| Re: Border Crashing by JoyLuck |
31-Jul-03/2:23 AM |
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need a tic tac for the alcohol breath? hehe. good work man. 9
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| Re: a comment on My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams |
31-Jul-03/1:34 AM |
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| Re: Mi Casa es Su Casa by <~> |
31-Jul-03/1:11 AM |
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| Re: My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams |
31-Jul-03/1:06 AM |
the repetition.. is a bit redundant. 6
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| Re: Billy Bob Jo by Inconceivable_Dreams |
31-Jul-03/1:02 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Pencil Dust [revised] by SupremeDreamer |
31-Jul-03/12:58 AM |
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im happy you enjoyed it. ;)
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| Re: Brittanyy by JoyLuck |
30-Jul-03/11:19 PM |
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| Re: a comment on plagiarism txt by daniella |
30-Jul-03/9:27 PM |
what the hell horus, stop reading my goddamned mind will you? yes, actually, i was accused of plagiarizing.. accusation was given to Memoirs of a monk - St. Screamer on another website that i posted it on, which pissed me off. some fuck wit claimed i stole verses from some guy named stclair.. or whatever, and that i stole my name from a welsh writer.. which pissed me off since my name was chosen differently all together.
the url for this is here:
http://pub8.ezboard.com/fthecriticalpoetsmessageboarpostpoemsforheavydutycritique.showMessage?topicID=8691.topic
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| Re: The difference between the two -=Dark_Angel=-'s by horus8 |
30-Jul-03/8:14 PM |
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ahhh.. burning blood and gore curdles in the mornin for breakfast.. yeah..
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| Re: plagiarism txt by daniella |
30-Jul-03/7:54 PM |
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| Re: And so the spider spun by horus8 |
30-Jul-03/7:24 PM |
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well, thom got sucked dry from horus8 the eight legged spider, and i smile wider in laughter, splashing in water, a child gone astray, named stinky! hehe. great job. 8.
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| Re: HANDRINOS IS A HUMOURLESS PRIG by walrus8 |
30-Jul-03/6:40 PM |
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eh... wtf. ok.. not sure what this is even sposed to be buts its stupid nontheless.
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| Re: Despair by marjan |
29-Jul-03/2:05 AM |
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i dont like the way you decided to present this thing, looks as if you were having seizures when you put this together.
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| Re: A Simple Emote. by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
29-Jul-03/2:03 AM |
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I liked the presentation.. 7.
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| Re: Infection by nocturnalism |
29-Jul-03/2:01 AM |
Once apon a midnight moon
came a baker
a night walker
salt shaker, wavin her cheeks
hasnt showered in two weeks
I watched my friend pay
30 bucks thrown away
he pressed his lips
against her vertical smile
he ended up in a pool of bile
puking sour dough
There.. not the best rewrite, but i think it tops your piece nevertheless. ;)
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