replying on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer
31 Jul 2003, 4:55 AM
tsk tsk. ;/
replying on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer
31 Jul 2003, 4:26 AM
jeez. well, i hope it turns into a good outcome.
replying on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer
31 Jul 2003, 4:17 AM
yikes, who stepped on your toes?
replying on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer
31 Jul 2003, 4:14 AM
hmmm. it suits this piece.
on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer
31 Jul 2003, 4:10 AM
lol. nice. btw, deadication, did you intentionally spell it that way? seems like it, just wanted to make sure first before i say something stupid. 9
on Border Crashing by JoyLuck
31 Jul 2003, 2:23 AM
need a tic tac for the alcohol breath? hehe. good work man. 9
replying on My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams
31 Jul 2003, 1:34 AM
i agree.
on Mi Casa es Su Casa by <~>
31 Jul 2003, 1:11 AM
well done. 8.
on My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams
31 Jul 2003, 1:06 AM
the repetition.. is a bit redundant. 6
on Billy Bob Jo by Inconceivable_Dreams
31 Jul 2003, 1:02 AM
hrmm.. amusing read. 7.
replying on Pencil Dust [revised] by SupremeDreamer
31 Jul 2003, 12:58 AM
im happy you enjoyed it. ;)
replying on plagiarism txt by daniella
30 Jul 2003, 9:27 PM
what the hell horus, stop reading my goddamned mind will you? yes, actually, i was accused of plagiarizing.. accusation was given to Memoirs of a monk - St. Screamer on another website that i posted it on, which pissed me off. some fuck wit claimed i stole verses from some guy named stclair.. or whatever, and that i stole my name from a welsh writer.. which pissed me off since my name was chosen differently all together.
the url for this is here:
http://pub8.ezboard.com/fthecriticalpoet
the url for this is here:
http://pub8.ezboard.com/fthecriticalpoet
on The difference between the two -=Dark_Angel=-'s by horus8
30 Jul 2003, 8:14 PM
ahhh.. burning blood and gore curdles in the mornin for breakfast.. yeah..
on plagiarism txt by daniella
30 Jul 2003, 7:54 PM
hmm. 7.
on And so the spider spun by horus8
30 Jul 2003, 7:24 PM
well, thom got sucked dry from horus8 the eight legged spider, and i smile wider in laughter, splashing in water, a child gone astray, named stinky! hehe. great job. 8.
on HANDRINOS IS A HUMOURLESS PRIG by walrus8
30 Jul 2003, 6:40 PM
eh... wtf. ok.. not sure what this is even sposed to be buts its stupid nontheless.
on A Simple Emote. by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Jul 2003, 2:03 AM
I liked the presentation.. 7.
on Infection by nocturnalism
29 Jul 2003, 2:01 AM
Once apon a midnight moon
came a baker
a night walker
salt shaker, wavin her cheeks
hasnt showered in two weeks
I watched my friend pay
30 bucks thrown away
he pressed his lips
against her vertical smile
he ended up in a pool of bile
puking sour dough
There.. not the best rewrite, but i think it tops your piece nevertheless. ;)
came a baker
a night walker
salt shaker, wavin her cheeks
hasnt showered in two weeks
I watched my friend pay
30 bucks thrown away
he pressed his lips
against her vertical smile
he ended up in a pool of bile
puking sour dough
There.. not the best rewrite, but i think it tops your piece nevertheless. ;)