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And so the spider spun (Ode) by horus8
Three dead flies Dried with no eyes This is my pint of blood. An emaciated cricket My home is the spicket With an hourglass under my hood. I can spin you a home & a rich fabric'd tome Any ol' day or night. Your eight-legged fear Of all you hold dear Afraid of when I may bite. I build with such passion My trend less fashions But none can share the same space. Because, I am a spider God's secret reminder I'm no man's charity case.

Up the ladder: Handy Smurf
Down the ladder: Thoughts

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.642857
Weighted score: 6.201025
Overall Rank: 982
Posted: July 30, 2003 7:15 PM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2003 7:22 PM PDT
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[8] daniella @ 200.68.200.116 | 30-Jul-03/7:20 PM | Reply
web footed surely
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > daniella | 30-Jul-03/7:23 PM | Reply
I don't do ducks.
[8] SupremeDreamer @ 66.81.149.142 | 30-Jul-03/7:24 PM | Reply
well, thom got sucked dry from horus8 the eight legged spider, and i smile wider in laughter, splashing in water, a child gone astray, named stinky! hehe. great job. 8.
[9] JoyLuck @ 68.75.22.185 | 30-Jul-03/10:58 PM | Reply

NICE

Can you look for the drained corpse of that lil bee, museheart, in that web of yours? I cannot find her anywhere.
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